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for One Step at a Time

by Dhvana

person yoblossom
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! I loved the chapter! I loved the shower scence so much! ^^
person animegirl
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God i love this story! this is one of the best fanfics i've read in a long time. i really like greg and warrick to gether and your OC is so hot, the three of them together is super hot!! i hope they get things sorted out soon though, i don't know how much more drama i can take, i just want to see them happy again. Your story is awesome, one request though, could you make th sex seens a little longer and more graghic *hehe i'm such a pervert* keep up the great work and update soon!
person Kim
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Teeheehee Nice You should right onw about Nick and Warrick. I love how you stuck to Gregs personality I hate it when people change a character into something totally different Keep writing!!! Bye

~Kimothy the Sage~
person Eve
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is absolutely fabulous. Please update soon! Will Nick and Gil get together? I really adore these pairings. Do you have your own website or update list? I would love to be on that list if you do.
person Electra
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I guess some tensions must be let out and missing something that important like Jack missing his music is really a reason to yell at someone. But is it really the fault of Warrick and Greg? Or is it something unhidden inside of Jack himself?

Thanks for the update in spite of all your stress at university! It's always a joy for me to check this site and be rewarded with a new chapter. Well. I'm looking forward to everthing that comes next.
Just one plea: Give him back his music. We all need some constants in you lives...

Love, Electra
person yoblossom
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so is that an omen that everythin will turn out ok? and hopefully jack will get his music back.... loved the chapter, can't wait till the next one!
person Kenshin-Gotenks
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! But ooooooo the suspence I really hope the cuties make up... Oh I am having trouble visualizing Jack, does he look like any celebrities?
person Amanda
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! this story is positively amazing! I love it. It's wondefully written, and inevitably sexy. Wonderful marvelous job!
person Kenshin-Gotenks
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is like one of the greatest stories EVER!!! please update soon! when you do maybe email me please? well great job keep it up!
person yoblossom
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they'll work it out right? Jack will go back, and they'll work it out? they have to! they need to know that they still care for eachother! can't wait for the next chapter