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by Oric13

person StaceyLo
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man what a great story! It's so well written in the style of the show too...really, just a fantastic job. Please continue.
person Lisa
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
person Anthony
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's just something about a mother/daughter pairing that makes for great erotica, even moreso than regular femslash stories. It's definitely my favorite, especially when they're as hot as Lorelai and Rory. Keep going with this.

About the ending, though...are we actually going to see Lane's reaction in the next chapter? Even if there's no Rory/Lane action (although we could sure use some of that around here ;D), it should be fun seeing Rory trying to explain her predicament.
person Mrs Boyscout
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Wow! That was amazingly hot. I definitely think you should continue this fic. Why do I think that Rory is going to go on a lot more dates with Dean as a result of the bargain! You are an incredible writer and the smut, oh so good. Thanks!
person Monnie
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES. Oh man, I've been waiting SO long for another one of these from you. In the next chapter (or the one after that, if you're planning on it!) I'd love to read about Rory going down on Lorelai. It's the fucking hottest thing EVER. Lauren Graham is a goddess, ooh god I'm hot for her. Keep writing, these are just fantastic. xx
person Phenom1
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... this story proves once againe that you are the king man(I have yet to find a story of yours that I don't like just keep up the good work and I'll be happy.