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by Oric13

person Favesfff
schedule October 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Oric. Your Storys are truly great, and to have gotten a review from you is awesome. It would be great if you could send me an email to favesfff@gmail.com 

schedule August 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

What, no chap 2?  I want more of this!  Rory needs to be trained and then fisted.  Bring this back!

person Joanne
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should make a sequel to this one shot.
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
liked it.
person dumblesisstupid
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude this is cool, when are you going to do chapter 2? It's been years! We NEED more!
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another masturpiece, err...masterpiece! This is only my second reading of your fanfics, and this one had me at a few moments of having to stop reading to laugh!

'This felt sooo much better than her own masturbation efforts!'-I know that feeling!

'She "accidentally" rubbed her thumb repeatedly against Rory's engorged clit, watching with delight as this triggered a third orgasm that caused her daughter to flop around on the table like a fish on dry land.'-Yeah...accident my horny little ass! Flopping around like a fish on dry land? I FUCKING LOVE THAT!

Seriously! As I was reading this, just reading alone was almost enough to make orgasm! You've got some good talent in you!
person Lorenzo Soledad
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW *chuckles* hot AND very well written, I can't wait to find out what'll happen in chapter 2 *nods excited*

Hurry up and update.
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update
person Bloodyhawk
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man... that was so good, hope you keep it up!
person MW007
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. My goodness. Wonderful. Very very very well done.


Very erotic. Nice.