rate_review Reviews

This was GREAT! I hope you will write more D/s Sara and Gil, because you seem to have a knack for it. I just wish there was more and it was longer. Let me know if you need a beta or any help. Whew-time to go take a cold shower.

My, My, My I do love a Guy like Gil Grissom in charge of himself and his sexuality! WOW! I really enjoyed the way you handled the Dominant/Submissive themes here without going overboard on the pain aspect of this type of sexual expression. Many folks think it's all about whips 'n chains, but often never realize that a Dom/Sub relationship
can be so much more than infliction of pain or humiliation on another person. Your story showed this beautifully and did not lose touch with the basic characterization of both Gil and Sara. Again, wonderful work, I'd really love to more like these; strong, seductive Grissom casting his spell over an unknowing, innocent Sara.

wow what an intense story, But I really really liked it, keep up the HoT Work

This story was so sexy. I normally do not consider myself a b/d fan, but you might have converted me.

WOW!!!! I am speechless I can't wait for more

Hot, very hot... Please more soon!

very sexy! i cant wait until u finally pair them up

Wow. More please?

whhhoh this is getting good and a brave grissom for letting sara check out his swimmers and how many there is lol.

please hurry and update soon cause it is to good to wait long.