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Great story, please update soon! x

Now there's a 'TBC' if ever there was one...I like this, it's written really well, I believed everything Kate was thinking, it was so...true. Just one little thing: 'excited' has a 'c' in it :p But apart from that, I loved it!

ooh that was harsh...but i totally feel for kate...im so torn between the 2 of them! everytime i see jack im like aw wow he's so sweet and, y'know, gorgeous, and then i see sawyer n i start drooling over his salty goodness lol! such a hard choice...cant wait for chapter 2 *hint hint*

xox

My first impulse is to say "Aww, Sawyer's not that mean! And Kate wouldn't do that; Kate and Jack are meant for one another"... which just shows how scarily good this show is. The characters get inside your head.

But although I thought it was tragic, I also believe thats what you intended... its very well written. You have the outward face of Sawyer to a T. I think Kate would say more though, but I shan't quibble with you on that point. It was quite believable, which is what all fanfiction should be. Now, you have to continue, and you just HAVE to make it so Jack and kate are together... please!!!

I really liked your story. Sawyer....ooooh yeah!

love, love, love it.

Hmm... I really enjoyed this one - though I'm not sure if sex is all Sawyer wants from Kate.
Anyhow - are you going to continue this? I'd love to read more.

Cheers,
Arella.

Wow...wow....wow that was good. Please update soon!

Great start- cain't wait to see how it turns out.....;)

YOWZERS!!!!!!!!! I loved it. You had Saywer's word's perfectly, I swear I could hear that smooth sexy voice saying those words! Keep writing!! I am not a huge Kate/Jack fan, I think Kate and Saywer are a far better match. But maybe you can convice me for a Kate jack shipper!