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by doggettfann

person Doggett\'s Kate
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow--this was hot! I needed to splash my face with cold water after reading it! The whole idea of John watching Monica pleasure herself like that was incredibly erotic. And John's sexy voice saying those things..woo hoo! Great job--can't wait to read the follow-up (hint, hint). :-)