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for Something You Shouldn’t Do

by ifyouweremine

person Aresy
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the tone of this story. Interesting way of writing this. Hhehe i agree more of these two. ^_^ Anyone for the challenge? I dont watch the show often, but i wouldn't mind reading some good fanfics on these two, like t his one. ^^ Good job.
person sg1niner
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I went to your author's profile after that other 70s Show fic I reviewed, hoping to find a lot more from you. Alas, "only" this one, but it was great. I'm not normally one for present-tense, but this one really worked in that format, adding to the angstiness of what the boys are feeling, esp. in the aftermath. Hope to find more work by you, I am hoping this isn't all!
person Deity
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was funny. You're very talented and I had a good laugh reading this. Though I could hardly ever picture the two together in my mind, you did a good job forming a mental picture for me to work with. Keep up the good work and I look foreward to reading whatever work you may come up with in the future.
person Wolfiekins
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Holy hemp, that was freakin' HOT! I've always been a closet fan of Ashton and Topher, and to see them together was erotic beyond words. Perfect setting. Loved the 'it's OK' device, and then the inevitable 'it's not OK' of the next day. Absolutely Cool!