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One of the best fanfictions I have read thus far on this site, "The Odds of Human Nature" had my mind on the edge of its proverbial seat throughout the entire course of the read. Full of pep, life, and an unusually fabulous story- an aspect not commenly found on this site. Well written, excelent grammar, and just enough spice to keep the sugar from melting. Not only was every single line written completely and totally in character, but the witty retorts thrown in were enough to make me laugh- not exactly an easy task when it comes to fanfictions and a pragmatic Badger!
I can only sing songs of praise for this story, and hope against hope that it is updated- and soon!

-Badger

YAY. I was half wondering if all the stories were gonna be incest andf lo and be hold...NOPE. *plops on bed* SOOOOOO when you gonna updates? its been what...*looks at updates* a month and no chapter...*big puppy face* you know I say....lots of sugary stuff and all that yummy junk food if you get another chapter up soon........PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

...so, come on, where's the rest?

I'm really into this now and you cannot leave me hanging on this one. There needs to be more, much, much more. Charlie is so well written and so adorable, and Ali seems like the perfect person for him. Please me you're still writing this?

I'm a fanfic writer myself and I know what it's like to lose passion for a story, I'm working on finding my inspiration again, so I really hope that you haven't lost this one. It's such a good story - the best NUMB3RS one on here by far, and better than many others I've found online. You see? We NEED you to finish this.

If you have lost your inspiration for this, then we must cure you (and quickly) so I suggest that you go and curl up on the sofa with some chocolate and yummies, and watch NUMB3RS to your hearts content, and then once you see how fabulously fabulous Charlie is, you'll be inspired again.

Nicky x

KEEP WRITING DAMN IT


i love u

fantastic fic btw ( i love charlies hair 2)

This is incredibly good. Please keep up the good work.

Still loving this story. More please!

I'm really enjoying this fic, and I hope you post more soon. I think you have quite the grasp on characterization of all players. Well done!

Oh! That last line scares me!!!!! What's he up to???? And what that line from Don, and does Don know about any of it? Wow! I love your story! Ali and Charlie are just soooo cute together! So, let's see some more smoochies! I demand smoochies!!!! :-) And I love Cam and Ali's conversations! They make me giggle. So, get typing! I need more! :-)

Wow, um... really nice, cant wait to see what will happen next.
Can't belive how you've managed to keep them so in-character.
I'm extremtly impressed, keep up the nice work ^.^

Really interesting start to a story. I hadn't thought of a Numb3rs story as fanfiction but of the few I read on this site, and a couple others, yours is the best so far. I hope you continue it!

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