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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was okay but I've read better. I think was bothered me most about the story was that you seem to dislike using pronouns and the 'Kali this' and 'Kali that' became tedious to read. also, I would like to know how she magically knew what a Ventrue and a Gangrel was? Those aren't things they know the instant they're embraced, they have to learn those things.