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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Has or will chapters 4 and beyond ever be posted? This series is excellent and there's nothing more disappointing than having a series end with a cliffhanger with no resolution.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. What precious pron. Thank you for sharing.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so its been a while huh? you should DEFINITELY UPDATE ASAP!!!
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!! I love it, I love it!!! The Marissa and Summer pairing is great, as is the Ryan and Lindsay pairing. Can't wait for you to write more. So please, come out with more soon!!!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so freaking hot :P. I'd look forward to Ryan and Marissa though
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awful. The characters might as well be named Clarence, Amy, and Tom for all the connection they have to O.C. canon. Your sex scenes are ridiculously overdone, and the likelihood of a virgin reacting the way Lindsay did is pretty much nil. I'm sure the readers who liked this had one hand fingering their genitals all the way, so I guess if you want to be proud that you helped people masturbate, that's, um, something. NOT something I'd ever put on a resume, though, if I were you.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AM A HUGE R/M FAN I AM SOOO WET RITE NOW..evn thogh it was r/l IF U DID THAT WITH R/M I THINK I WOULD PROBOLY ORGASM RIGHT HERE IN THE CHAIR!!!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I loved that first chapter - extremely hot!! Continue soon plz and bring on the girl on girl action - can't wait
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great job! That story was really clear and well written. Kudos and continue!