rate_review Reviews

This story is very good! I like how you are including all of the characters and still getting that sense of action that happens on the show. The quick cuts to other peolpe, especially in the lab! Poor Greg...already bogged down with work. I hope you continue soon!

I hope in you next installment you are at least able to use the proper spelling of the character's names. And it might serve you well to either date this fic pre-season 5 team split or explain why they are all working the case together. Heck, it might not hurt you to actually watch a few episodes.

Ok ... I'll be waiting for the next installment! Used to be an SVU fan and crossed-over to this show. You've got a good beginning, but where's the groaner?????? Did I miss it???? This show -- the last line in the first scene (before they run the theme song)-- always, always ALWAYS contains either a putrid pun or a really baaaad joke (and it's usually Grissom delivering it in deadpan). Your first fic? Wow! Good job! Keep going with this! Gogogogo! I'll be waiting ... :)

Hey, this story is great so far! I'm waiting for the next chapter! Yay, smut! Also wanted to let you know that there is no 'H' in Sara. ;-) Common mistake.

Update soon!

SidleFan