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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. Can't wait to see who the master is and what he has planned for David!! PLEASE keep me updated on this fantastic story
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Arrrggghhhh!!!! Don't stop here!
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry you have not gotten more reviews! Your story is supurb, your writing flawless, the style completly in key with the show...ah i could compliment you for days! Please i beg you continue, i must know what is going on. And honestly i have never seen such a well written fanfiction. I just read all you have and i think i found maybe one grammatical error, and that is, to say the least, quite a feat. Wow, thats all i can say. Please keep writing, and dont worry about few reviews, because lots of people read and enjoy but are too shy, stupid, or lazy to review. A big big fan, Demosthenes
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey good story, another chapter plz