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I hope you're planning on writing chapter 6 because I just have to know what happens. I think you have tremendous talent and you have certainly captured Gil perfectly. Please, please, please complete this fic.

I just came across your story and have to say that it has held me rivetted. You are a wonderful writer. I'm so glad that Gil is finally going to see Moira. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

My apologies for the delay. Since updating this fic last time, I moved and ended up in the hospital with a herniated disk in my back. After a lumbar laminectomy (they cut the herniated portion of the disk out....gotta love back surgery), I'm home recovering, and trying to get back to work on the sixth and final chapter of this installment. Then it will be on to the second installment, which I already have TONS of fun ideas for.

Every once in a while I check to see if there's more but, alas, nothing. Is this fic ever going to continue or are M and G history? Sad to think about. I've so enjoyed this story...please consider finishing.

Wow! That was terrific. Have to admit - I was beginning to wonder if the story would continue but I'm thrilled that you're still going and it was absolutely worth the wait. I wasn't sure if I wanted Grissom's mom to enter this particular story but you did it quite believably. I also was frustrated with Griss' behaviour at the end but I can't honestly say that it was OOC so kudos for a job well done - at least our guy came around in the end. Just do us a favour and don't have our 'bug guy' in the doghouse with all his peeps for too long, 'kay? :) Thanks again and I reallly look forward to chapter 6! Now, I'll be checking every few days. P.S. Sorry about your computer difficulties - what a humungous pain :(

OK THIS IS THE THIRD FOR ME!! HAHA!!
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- MYSTICAL PANTHER

I am a big G/S fan myself, but this story captured me. The way you write is very realistic and I like that a lot. In most stories Grissom is way out of character, but not in yours. I love it, keep writing! I am craving your next chapter :)

hey..just read the 5th chapter..hoping to read more soon

good story!

2!!! FOR ME!!!
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I JUST READ IT ALL AGAIN SO YEAH!!
-MYSTICAL PANTHER

Great job with this chapter! The parts you told me about worked really well - looking forward to the next one.