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for Thunder Gold

by scyllablue

person Scaught
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! When Cam said 'not until he forgives himself' what did he mean by that? Does he secretly have a crush on Dustin? Did Hunter know before that final scene that Alex remembered being the Yellow Wind Ranger?
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet go man, can you get more done ASAP?
person D-Puppy
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so will Dustin/Alex be able to turn into like a mega ranger? Just as long as him and Hunter somehow stay together, I'm good. Remember that.
person CamFan4Ever
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! Please update soon!

Yes sex scene please!
person Yellowcrimsonforever
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, glad you liked 'out shopping' Probably the story I'm most proud of. I dunne why. As for why don't I post here, no idea either. Anyway, on topic now: great chapter, I hope Dustin/alex remembers everything. Update soon.
person Dany
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have some serious talent! I really like your style, it's easy to read, your dialogues flow very nicely, and your action scenes are very well written. I know how hard those can be :)
I myself am more into writing Cam/Hunter (see 'Sentry Duty), but I enjoy this story very much and I like that you brought in Cam to try to make Dustin remember who he is. Keep it up, please! And soon :)
Dany
person Yellowcrimsonforever
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wiiee, an update!! Cool chapter. Can't wait to see what shane's gonna do now. Update soon!
person Dany
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this got pretty hot! I am intriegued. There must be more to Hunter's spell and brainwashing than just plain lust for Dustin. And Shane seemed suddenly very jealous after deducing that Dustin must be the third Thunder Ranger. Hmmm...
I'm curious to see what happens.
Dany
person CamFan4Ever
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chappie! Please update soon and more smut please!
person Little Wing
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty awesome story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that you are able to update again soon.