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for The Breaking Point

by tcrowe

person csifan
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely looove this story! Haven't checked for an update in a year and am still disappointed. Any chance there will be a completion? I've so enjoyed this - hate to lose it.
person linda
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story but this is'nt the end is it.
person DaveGranger
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really need more, pretty please? This is just the best story!
person the teach
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Several new chapters? What can I say except, you made my weekend! So glad Sara's home, albeit briefly, with an arsenal of talent to keep Gil happy and pain-free. Your characters, especially Gil, Sara and Noreen, are written so beautifully and there are so many exquisite moments that this story is quite addictive. Here's to a long story, with sequels ;) Thanks again.
person sassy
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness! you have to update this pronto! i was like hell yeah and then the chapter was over and there was no more! please soon! off to read more of your wonderful stories!
sassy
person Sparky 1943
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, just when I thought you couldn't write any better!! I love this story. I love Grissom's compassion and passion. I love the way you soften Sara. Just great. Please, don't stop.
person csifan
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I am so hooked on this story - it's unbelievably great! Your plot is well laid out, characterization is thoughtful and thorough and I can't help but adore Noreen! The way she is with Griss is so warm and loving. She is just what our boy needs in Sara's absence. Vulnerable!Grissom stories are absolutely my fave and this one is just so well-written.

Very anxious for more! Please post soon. Thank you for your very satisfying creation.
person sassy
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! it is me from the yahoo group...i have been reading this tonight i haven't read chapters 12 or 13 but will finish them tomorrow! i can't wait i am just to tired! i read 1 thru 11 in one sitting i have been sitting here for over an hour! i love it! the beginning didn't quite jive with the one that i just finished reading but i love it anyway....can't wait to read that other one you were talking about the point a to point b did you say that was what it was? let me know when i can read it ok?
sassy
person Sassy
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, it is me again! i know i know i can't help it! i love your stories! keep it coming! oh yeah! was griss's mom speaking or using asl? I thought she was deaf. i am mean i am sure she can talk to but would they have that on tv? oh well, you are the author not me! brilliant mind you have! now update this soon and the point a to point b too!
sassy
person CSI GIRL
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS CAN"T WAIT FOR MORE, I AM CURIOUS TO KNOW WHERE YOU ARE GOING. I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW JUST HOW MUCH, I LOOK FORWARD TO THE CONCLUSION OF THIS ONE AND MANY MORE FROM YOU, KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK.

CSI GIRL