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for Through the Looking Glass

by Vee017

person angelsdee
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely hot chapter! I have been waiting for them to 'resume' their relationship and you did a great job! Please keep them coming! LOL sorry for the slip of the tongue and the double entendre. I meant keep the updates coming but the other works for me too.
person Silver
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow,
I loved the dialogue between Telemachus and Harper! You portraied Harper perfectly!!! I can actually see him gaping like a fish on the beach, hehehehe... Awesome chapter!
Cu
Silver
person Silver
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the updates were wonderful! I love the way Beka and Rhade talk to each other! You really have a fine way of writing down those nice and intense dialogues. And now I can't wait to see the meeting of Harper and Rhade! Fun fun fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CU
Silver
person b5delenn
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG has Santa Claus come and no one told me? An update and a new story! I have to say I'm eager to see some action between these two again. And the interactions between Emily and Telemachus are lovely. WE WANT MORE!
person prin69
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing chapter as always. and i love that poem.
person angelsdee
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated. Ahhh! Finally reunited! Can't wait to see what you've got planned.
person Silver
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story!!!!!! You write it brilliantly and your persons are so adorable!!! I am looking forward to see what will happen between father and daughter and especially Beka's reaction!
Cu
Silver
person Val
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember the last time I enjoyed a fan fic as much as this one.
Keep it coming, you have me hooked and I can't wait for the next installment!

person angelsdee
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving this story and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
person Saphirephoenix
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. The whole 'they were destined to be together' theme is a favorite of mine. Plus, it's a hoot to see Beka Valentine as a mom. I can't wait to read the rest of the story.