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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're not the only one who sees Don/Charlie.
I really like this and can't wait for the next part. :)
I really like this and can't wait for the next part. :)
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. My only problem is that the diologue conradicts the original characters. Otherwise it is beautifly written. Great job
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like this. I like how you have captured Charlie's character. He is somewhat confused when dealing with people and his own emotions but he still knows what he wants, or rather, doesn't want. Charlie is no whimp, just a tad naive at times. So, when are you going to post the next part? I'm waiting...
And you are sooo not alone in seeing Don/Charlie on the show. Unfortunately there are so few people writing this pairing and I am desperate to find a good relationship story. That is why I am so happy to have found your story. Thank you and keep writing!
And you are sooo not alone in seeing Don/Charlie on the show. Unfortunately there are so few people writing this pairing and I am desperate to find a good relationship story. That is why I am so happy to have found your story. Thank you and keep writing!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAGH Review dammit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that just left me HANGING THERE! NOOO! write more more more!!! you seem like you have a good grasp on future chapters-- hopefully i just motivated you to write more more more!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY,some Numb3rs slash.Keep writing please,I`m desperate when it comes to slash in this fandom.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That little kiss got your story taken off fanfiction.net? Really, can´t see why´d it bother anyone. Especially considering you put up warnings. I mean it´d be so very easy to NOT read the story if one didn´t go for this sort of thing... Though that said, I loved it. And should you decide to add more chapters to it (that would perhaps warrant the R or even a NC-17 rating) I´d be more than pleased to read it... Today is actually the first time I´ve managed to find any Numb3rs slash at all so any little thing is appreciated:)
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you *can't* leave me hanging!! Please write more!! And no, you're not the only one to see Dom/Charlie, cause I see it too.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing, Finish it. I want to see what happens. Incest is only good if it's written right, and you know how to do it.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't thnk anyone could watch Numb3rs without seeing Don and Charlie together just the tiniest bit, but they are my flavor of the season definitely. Your story is starting out kick-ass and I would love to see its continuation. Keep writing incest is only illegal due to the warped offspring it brings into being between bro and sis, plain old survival of species. Can't wait to read the next installment and I should add a story here too.
Sin.,
Barnners
Sin.,
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like this. A lot.
I find it spot on with the characterization of Charlie. How he is so very smart yet is so naive about most things that has to do with people. And his own emotions. Yup. Author... write more of this. I want to know what goes through Don's head when his little brother flees after that kiss. I just love angst, but with a happy ending ofcourse. Good start, hopefully of a loooong story.
I find it spot on with the characterization of Charlie. How he is so very smart yet is so naive about most things that has to do with people. And his own emotions. Yup. Author... write more of this. I want to know what goes through Don's head when his little brother flees after that kiss. I just love angst, but with a happy ending ofcourse. Good start, hopefully of a loooong story.