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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*nods* i agree when people do that (being narrow minded) it gets annoying. oh well at least i'm not one of 'em but i would like and update please!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was beautifully written. I love Don/Charlie and I see nothing wrong with their love. Who cares if it is incest? We know that it will never happen but we like to dream that it would. Thank for beginning to write this. I hope I see more chapters from you!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far. I'd love to read the rest of it.
That sucks about FF.net, but I'm glad you found somewhere else to post it, cause I liked reading it.
-Bekah
That sucks about FF.net, but I'm glad you found somewhere else to post it, cause I liked reading it.
-Bekah
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHhh, Poor Don, Poor Charlie... Poor Amita too
So when you said reviews could convince to write more... Did you mean more of this or more in general, cus both would be good, but I am kind of curious if you have thought out a what happened next in your head...Oh yeah, great story by the way.
So when you said reviews could convince to write more... Did you mean more of this or more in general, cus both would be good, but I am kind of curious if you have thought out a what happened next in your head...Oh yeah, great story by the way.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this beginning. I like the numbers incest pairing of Don/'Charlie and I think that you could really, really go somewhere with this story. Please do continue it. It could an ever so tasty story.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter is well written and interesting. I like the hesitation on Charlie’s part and the confusion he has about his feelings. You promised us a case in the summery and this story holds many promises in so many ways. Please continue!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! YES! I can totally see this pairing! *practically dancing* Ajem. Apologies. But I'm very excited with how this is going to turn out! Please continue writing more, I'd really like to see what happens next. =)
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon! this is kinda cute!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I liked your first chapter very much. I love this pairing. Hope you will write a second chapter soon.
Iriel
I liked your first chapter very much. I love this pairing. Hope you will write a second chapter soon.
Iriel
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, you are definetly not the only one out there who sees Don/Charlie. I am looing forward to the enxt chapters, your ff sounds good so far! ^^ I love Charlie's shyness!