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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Job. Just a little short. Longer? Its good so far, just makes me wish you had written more.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please right more!!!! CMM is so sexy!!!!!!!!!
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD STORY, CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER, HOPE TO SEE FELIX... YUMMY
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! THis was such a hot fic, pleaz post the next chapter, i blew an extremely nice load while reading this dude
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I love it so much. Update soon!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great please please please update soon.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jake;
I normally wont take objection to a bad review because it is a persons opinion but I do take objection to your implication that I would copy or steal from a fellow writer. Do you realize how many fics on the site alone have used the review equals update ploy. Though I respect Slayer (s)he (sorry not sure) was not the first and surely wont be the last to use that trick. I normally object to using this trick myself but felt that I wanted to improve my writing and thought a few knowledgable reviews would help me acheive that goal. Aside from that I didn't appreciate the statement about "his fic was deserving of 10 reviews but u gotta either make up ur own shit or stop writin."which to me implied that my fic was not deserving of ten reviews which once again is your opinion. The only reason why I want reviews is so that I can be a better writer which only stands to benefit all of you.
Kaeo
I normally wont take objection to a bad review because it is a persons opinion but I do take objection to your implication that I would copy or steal from a fellow writer. Do you realize how many fics on the site alone have used the review equals update ploy. Though I respect Slayer (s)he (sorry not sure) was not the first and surely wont be the last to use that trick. I normally object to using this trick myself but felt that I wanted to improve my writing and thought a few knowledgable reviews would help me acheive that goal. Aside from that I didn't appreciate the statement about "his fic was deserving of 10 reviews but u gotta either make up ur own shit or stop writin."which to me implied that my fic was not deserving of ten reviews which once again is your opinion. The only reason why I want reviews is so that I can be a better writer which only stands to benefit all of you.
Kaeo
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a great story. I say keep doing what you're doing
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just update man.. Even if you don't get 10 chapters, just update..! Cuz otherwise there's almost nothing to update for.. So come on, dude.. Just update.. It was good so far..