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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo
This story was incredible! I loved the descriptions and the tone! Please keep this story's excellence up and continue with the next chapter
Waiting so eagerly that I check this site every single day,
Nate
This story was incredible! I loved the descriptions and the tone! Please keep this story's excellence up and continue with the next chapter
Waiting so eagerly that I check this site every single day,
Nate
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg you are so mean i wanna know what happened please finish it
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please finish it, write another chapter. I beggin you. Don't wait for the other 9 reviews, just right it alright. it was great and I can't wait for more. I want to see what happens with the boys.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Nice show. Please update.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
If you are wondering whether or not you wanna read this, don't think; READ THIS. There are a lot of hot descriptions in here, and that combined with already hot characters and hot situations, creates an overall very hot story. Only one thing wrong; some of the grammar, like periods are bad.
If you are wondering whether or not you wanna read this, don't think; READ THIS. There are a lot of hot descriptions in here, and that combined with already hot characters and hot situations, creates an overall very hot story. Only one thing wrong; some of the grammar, like periods are bad.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I am loving your story. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
I came 4 TIMES reading this, (if you must know, I am into sweat, SO HOT!)
Anyways, The only critisicm i HAVE is your punctuation!!!!!
Please Capitlize first word of every sentence, and end each sentence with a period.
ANYWAY
Your story is hot. You are hot. OTH is hot. The result in writing?
HHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
I came 4 TIMES reading this, (if you must know, I am into sweat, SO HOT!)
Anyways, The only critisicm i HAVE is your punctuation!!!!!
Please Capitlize first word of every sentence, and end each sentence with a period.
ANYWAY
Your story is hot. You are hot. OTH is hot. The result in writing?
HHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing plaes ud soon
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmhm pretty pretty getting horny, maybe a DP soon please