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by KaticaLocke

person Anon
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
way cool, please do more, I liked Bishop in this chapter, never before thought she was cool.
person Killer Silver Wolf
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i'm begging u pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase
person Carmella
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude if I could put faces up on this comment it would be wide eyed and slack jawed with a wha? That was intence, please do contiue! I need to know who did it and everything.
person Carmella
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FRIGED SHIZNT!!!!!!! That was so . . . dude I can not even discribe how blown away I am from friged reading that stuff. . .but I do know that i can say this quite easly. More please!
person Killer Silver Wolf
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's coming along gr8 and i can't wait 4 the next chapter
person CArmella
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was so touching! PLease do go on and can you make then longer?
person CArmella
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat was well done, I must say the explanaition of this stroy is going very well please do continnue.
person Killer Silver Wolf
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's really good so far, can't wait 4 next few chapters and i certainly can't wait to find out what happens next, will u b writing any more stories about Goren and Eames? i hope that u will b
person Carmella
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY-SHIZ-NIT! That was good, more please? Could we I wonder get some of the witch hunt for the culprit? You know search the roster of the Acult shops? Possable Covens in the city or clubs? Groups that do magic and are open about it? The stroy is well done thius far but I truly would like to see more of it, like two three chapters more at a time cues this one at a time is driving me nutso, my imagantion works in fast forward. Oh and do we ever see any true parings?
person Carmella
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey your doing great this case is rocken, can you give us more please?