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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was the first law and order fanfiction I ever read...And it is still my favorite. I still enjoy coming back to read it all over again. It is wonderful, well thought out and the characterizations are beleivable.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice ending, just what I've been waiting for. Though, I don't know if it was a computer glitch or what, but you lost some storyline between chapters 46 and 47. I have no complaints about anything else, what you wrote is outstanding! But I would like to know the details of what happened between chapters 46 and 47, unless we aren't meant to have them, then I shall rejoice over what I have. Blessed Be!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What a story! I just read the enitre thing in like 2 hours, I couldn't take my eyes off the screen. Please tell me you're going to finish this, I'd really be interested in what happens next and how this all ends. It's not often someone portrays the Faith with any Truth, so I am assuming you are a follower, or at least a knowledgable believer. I really love what you're doing with this plot line, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please keep writing! Blessed Be!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is REALLY GOOD! I was startled at first when Eames touched Goren, then remembered in the summary your mentioning "supernatural." Far out! I hadn't realized how LONG this story is, so I'm taking a break from reading; I'm marking it for "recommended" and I'll be coming back to finish. It's intriguing to see Benson & Stabler, and Goren & Eames, in a story together. Do L&O characters from various shows in the franchise count as a crossover, though? I've often wondered that, for both L&O and the various Trek series. No matter, though, it's all good. Looking forward to finishing it. I'm VERY critical of proper spelling and grammar, and except for one or two little typos, your story is doing great, kudos! It's always refreshing to find another author who knows proper English, including punctuation. Will check back later, after I wake up a bit (it's early A.M. in Seattle). Awesome job so far! (I gave it a 5 out of 5, too, BTW).
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, dear God, please finish that. I love this story, so supernatural and interesting and I love what you've made the characters into, while still retaining thier personalities. I hope you add more soon, because you've left me hanging and I don't want to have to come up with an ending in my imagination.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! I need to know what happens!! T.T This story is amazing.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT !! Chapter 46 seems so close to the end... Please finish! and don't forget a disclaimer.
Thanks so much for writing this story,
bw
Thanks so much for writing this story,
bw
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update please please please please please i'm begging you please add another chapter please
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please update soon!!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update i'm begging you please update