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for Smoldering Desires

by msgrits

person LucyGrissom
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sad! :( You are a wonderful writer, I enjoy all your fics! And we can all use some dark stories like this now and then.
person brainfear
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.

ch4
person Solaris_Snape
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww this is getting a little sad but very good......
i'll be sad to see him go but perhaps he'll be a little better off not in pain....

so...is she pregnant ? lol i'd write it that way lol

UPDATE!! Please!!
person brainfear
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice one! more please.


ch3
person ST-FLEUR
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

your story is a succession of sensual scenes which wakes up passion and desire. I just love it love it love it when Grissom talks and thinks dirty ! LOL
person ferndavant
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy...Shit...NIIIICE. Beyond nice. KINKY! Amazing. MORE MORE MORE MORE!
person phebe
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. she's a wanton hussy. Haha. More please.

03/02/05