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thnx for the new post!

ch10

Love your work, my noly complaint is i hav to wait so long between each chapter. i'm so impatient. Keep up the good work and please more, more MORE!!!

I thought that Dana had a husband...

good one. i like Sara pregnant. she's sweet :o)

ch8

great chapter. and tell that girl that reviewed before me to get a grip sheesh

ch7

Sorry, but those veggie foods have protein but not iron. There are plenty of itemns in the veggie kingdom that have iron in themm. Meat eaters need supplements just as much as vegetarians, and white meat has very little iron in it anyhow. Also, Gil Grissom, being a scientist, would not insist on meat because he would actually do research and find that it would not be necessary.

See: http://www.andrews.edu/NUFS/Vegetarian%20Diets%20During%20Pregnancy.html

Hopefully the reviewer thingy won't strip the url. If that doesn't show up, do a search on google for "vegetarian pregnancy" and look at all the links.

Sorry for this, but I hate when people mistake cultural assumptions for science.

Why are you torturing us? This is such a great story, can wait for the next chapter!

Awesome! This story gets better and better each time you post! More please!

ch6

This was so sad! I hope this is not a sad ending type fic because I don't do sad fic well! You will post a warning if it is right?? Your writing has really matured, I like that! You are one of the queens of angst. I like your take on the perptetually emotionally unavailable Grissom.

I like this!!! MOre, more!