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for Smoldering Desires

by msgrits

person Wander52
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is one of the best stories I have ever read....WOW.....
person J
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your style rocks! My best friend and I send quotes to each other from our favorite fics and I must have cut and pasted 8 quotes from your story alone!

Sharpening a stiletto so that I can kick your ass?

Brilliant!!

I love your Cath vocals...got her PEGGED!
person CSILiz
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done. I truly enjoyed this story. The flow and ebb of the language was beautiful and real.
person Juanita
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. I really enjoyed your stories under Adult Fan Fiction. Please keep up the good work.
person nick55
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person Adele
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story! The angst and pain while they were apart was so hauntingly beautiful, and the reunion was so sweet - more please ;D
person jovanka
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding? Brass is adorable! You so have to hook him up with Dana. Nice writing. I'm really enjoying this story
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Thanks for updating. More please!

ch11
person wingzgirl
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see you updated this! I had just re-read what you had up so far this morning. It was so perfectly angsty!
person jbr12476
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am trying to be patient, but it's not working, I need an update and soon! I really love this story and can't wait to see Griss' reaction to Sara being pregnant. Serves him right for not telling her what was going on with him, glad that he's feeling guilty about it. So please update soon, so I can find out what happens with the reunion and all.

Wonderful story!

Jen