rate_review Reviews

Love the basketball game idea. Martin and Mac oughta tie Simon to the basketball pole NAKED. The line of visitors includes Ruthie's ex, Peter.

I'd love to have a videotape, hell, even the audio would be great, of Simon getting fucked by Martin and Harry. Great chapter. I loved picturing Martin's balls slapping against Simon's ass as he fucked him. Can't wait for Mac to meet Simon. Those three oughta play strip basketball. Love to see each of them in various stages of undress, eventually their hard cocks bouncing up and down the court of the backyard of the PK's house. They could either do a daisychain suck or Simon could be sandwiched between Martin and Mac. All in the open where Kevin, in his garage apartment, is taping it all while jerking off himself. Then in walks Harry...

I loved chapter 3. Hot!!!! Simon and Harry make a great couple. The fact Harry was fucking Ruthie and now screwed with Simon didn't surprise me for I always thought he didn't care how he got his rocks off. Simon's sure having a hot weekend, can hardly wait for Martin and Mac to get together with Simon. Sorta thinking Mac's even more of a marathon fucker than Martin is and once he meets Simon, Mac's gonna drill his cock into Simon's Tunnel of Love with gusto. Both Martin and Mac would love to see Simon get gang banged by the entire baseball team with Simon's mouth, cock, ass, and nips serviced by 5 players at once. The PK would go wild! Love to see Simon start having sex in more public places, after all, who would object to see Simon's sexy body in action/

bbear, I sent you 2 emails, let me know if you need me to re-send. Want to talk about collaborating on future updates. I started chapter 4 where you left off. Simon, Harry, Martin and Mac. This time I promise I will finish it soon and post it.

I loved your chapters - really hot and in sync with Chapter 1.

thanks for the kind words travis! and i gladly hand the story back over to you! again, i hope that it was alright for me to go in and add what i did. im glad u like it!

Hey everyone,

I haven't logged in here for a while. Thanks so much for your updates bbear, I could only skim them right now, they are too hot and ummm arousing. But I can tell you are a good writer and in sync with my first chapter.

Sorry for being so neglectful in writing my updates, but bbear truly came through.

Thanks so much for all the kind words, it really means a lot to me! I HAVE to write another chapter. Loyal readers and authors like you all make it so worthwhile. :-)

damn..........that was awesome i need more soon please!!!

Chapter 3, first Simon/Martin then Simon/Harry, is so hot I bet it gives every guy a instant boner and a fanastic cum!

omgosh thank you ive been waiting for an update to this story for forever.. it was soo hott.. please write more.

After Martin plows Simon, please have Harry making love with Simon. I think Martin's whole baseball team would love a crack at Simon's ass.