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for Martin and Harry's first time.

by justin1234

schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's good,but you should include kevin and matt in the scenes now
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter well done,personally i would have stuck with the nown characters, but this is good.
Hope jou update soon.
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Everyone,

Chapter 6 is up! "Baseball Team Gangbang"

Hope you like it, please keep the reviews and suggestions coming. bbear and I really like to hear your feedback and want to see what you'd like to see in future chapters.

Thanks for reading, hope everyone's having a great summer.

Travis
person JD
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This truly s one of the hottest stories i read.
Me i suggest trowing kevin and peter in the mix for the next chapter that wil hopefully be published soon.

A loyal reader
person pettrum
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the ides of a ruthie tag-team chapter.
person cakid
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simon used to look at at Robbie pretty intensely at times, and the way they used to always get into little pointless arguments and shit? It was almost like flirting. It's time they both let loose and let them emotions free along with their raging boners. How about Robbie arriving for a short visit with the Camdens. Robbie, alone with Simon, shares a joint with Simon in the Camden living room and their emotions are no longer held in check. Another scenario would be Simon passing Robbie's room late at night. He sees Robbie covered in a sheet and remembers Robbie told him once that he always sleeps nude. Now Simon can't resist looking, then touching, then jerking and sucking Robbie all the while that Robbie's asleep!

The gang bang of Simon would be awesome as you know he loves boys and their cocks. Everyone on Martin's team would be hot and horny once they see Simon's pretty pouty lips and get hard leaky boners at just the thought of his lips approaching their hungry dicks. I love to see Simon tied up in the school gym as the team explores Simon's ass, cock, and mouth! Some creative use of a Nautilus machine and bungee cords might be called for.

More Aaron Carter (Harry) is always appreciated for AC and DG would make great lovers as they're both cute and sexy and so very hot!

Regardless of what's in store for future chapters, thanks for writing a hot story!
person bbear
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS STORY IS SOOO HOT!! there should totally be a baseball team orgy chapter! id also love to see Robby come back to drill Simons tight hole, and Matt too!! i cant wait to see Kevin get his hands on Simon, maybe have Kevins studly brother Ben come and they can tagteam Simon! And more Harry in the future! Aaron Carter is soo hot! This story has such great potential, there are so many possible pairings it could go on forever!! I love it!! keep up the good work gents!
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kevin and Simon! Or Matt and Simon! Anything with Simon with a more well-known character.
person bbear
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok chapter 4 is up. I don't know when 5 will be up, nor do I know if it will be me or travis who writes it. It certainly won't be up any time soon, so get your fills of this one ;-)

Some ideas for future chapters, please comment on the ones you'd like to see in the future:

-Baseball Team Gangbang (obvs with some OC characters)
-Ruthie tagteam with all the boys
-Kevin/Simon or Kevin/all the guys
-Story with Wilson (Mary's Ex)
-Story with Robbie (ANOTHER Mary Ex)
-Story with Chandler (Asst. Minister)
-Story with Peter (Ruthie's Ex)

Anything other ideas or more in-depth scenarios are always welcome, we'd be nowhere without the fans! Please R&R!!
person kyle
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simon gets gang banged and loves it! Mac gets his ass. Martin his mouth. Harry his cock. Peter his left nipple. His right nipple's still available!
Loved every chapter. You're both great writers. It's hot and sexy!