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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. that was quite interesting. it could've been written a little better and with more detail, but that aside, the story was extremely good. you should write more.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fdsf
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. I really liked that. Great job!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marissa getting fucked doggy style by Alex wearing a strap-on? You could type blind and that would still be the best OC lemon ever.
However, you also managed to write well. Nice work, and keep it up. Please continue the story, that was so ****ing hot I almost orgasmed reading it.
However, you also managed to write well. Nice work, and keep it up. Please continue the story, that was so ****ing hot I almost orgasmed reading it.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good fanfic.. i mean really good!! absolutely loved it, only wished it was longer.. or that there was more!! are u ever going to post another chapter?? purleeaasseee do!! i love malex and ur fic is hot.. xx
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fanfic was very good, but would have been better were it much longer and started out with more detail before the sex, like more of a storyline. The only other thing I was concerned with was a couple of typos and things that didn't quite make sense, but other than that it was good. You should write more fics about Marissa and Alex.
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT & INTENSE!!!! u SHOULD CONTINUE. gOOD START. i LOVE mARISSA/aLEX.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good description, there shud b more a/m fics :)