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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing uncontrolled by the end of this chap. Can there possibly be more scenarios for these two?
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ready for the next story. That was good. I too would like to see this on screen!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, so I read it, and I remember reading it before. I definitely love your writing-style, I think you're really talented ! And I can't wait for more ! Although the conversation with Ecklie might be a bit OOC for Grissom, but hey, like you said, we never saw a Grissom-in-love so maybe it isn't. Can't wait to see some proof for that on the show LOL ! No, don't ever be insecure, you're very good at this !
Lin
Lin
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful, I really enjoyed reading it
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
I gotta say, ,I see your take of that diner invitaion very easily. I haven't seen the ep yet, but I found a clip and I chose to loook on that invite as a plan to win her over to the night shift politically. not that I don't think she'd try to make something else of it. itdiot males who can't see that...
anyhow. can't think of a single thing I'd change in your story. everyone's character was real, and I was smirking through most of it. and enough sex to be real.
I gotta say, ,I see your take of that diner invitaion very easily. I haven't seen the ep yet, but I found a clip and I chose to loook on that invite as a plan to win her over to the night shift politically. not that I don't think she'd try to make something else of it. itdiot males who can't see that...
anyhow. can't think of a single thing I'd change in your story. everyone's character was real, and I was smirking through most of it. and enough sex to be real.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was just.. wow! You made me blush, giggle, and feel like a very naughty school girl! <3 I can not describe how much I love this story. I marveled in it's sexiness and love making from start to finish.. Mmm.. I must get this image of a naked Grissom out of my head before my husband wakes up.. I am such a naughty girl. XD At any rate, this is a great story, I give it twenty thousand thumbs up!.. Oh.. and Grissom's boxer-briefs! XD
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice first chapter
A little bit too in medias res maybe, but that's okay.
I'll come back and read the rest when I've actually seen season five :)
A little bit too in medias res maybe, but that's okay.
I'll come back and read the rest when I've actually seen season five :)
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE tha sex!!!! lol This is a good story.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh wooo wooo! Another hot hot hot chapter! In my opinion, it's easier to find and keep up with stories that are all one, long continuous thing... but this is up to you! Keep it comin' no matter how you do it! And lots of sex is a GOOD thing. Plot is good, too... of course!