rate_review Reviews

I was really bored with this. I may have only seen the series once but this just wasn't interesting enough to keep my attention. Keep practicing and don't let a bad fic discourage you from writing.

umm...no

Here I was, hoping for some kind of in-character Monk fanfic. I really enjoy the show. Adrian Monk would never, ever, ever, ever simply accidentally swallow two dozen pills by shaking a bottle of medicine over his mouth.

Thanks for writing Monk fanfiction. I haven't really seen much of it.

Hey, some good tips on writing fan fiction, find authors you really like and read a lot of their stuff. You'll become so accustomed to that style that you may start to immitate it, thus raising your stories closer to the level of the authors you admire most. :) :)

kudos for trying to write a Monk NC-17 fic... overall, though? could use some work. You use the same words constantly and, frankly, much of the fic seems almost clinical as opposed to sensual.