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for Forein Love

by roselvr

person charlotte
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, i liked this. need more please
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is English your 2nd language? If so, then disregard the rest of this review.

Your spelling and grammar can be horrendous at times. But since I hate all M/M fics, I would probably be biased in this case, so I will comment no further.

By the way, you may want to use a spellchecker before submitting your "stories"
person roselvr
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tjis was wranchy
person charlotte
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is there more
person no1
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah
person GG
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story got me wet! I want to masterbate to it again!!
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so funny!!!!! I loved the ending! Make another one!