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I can't wait to see how vicky will get Dev. Please update soon!!

This is great, I was afraid of how you would handle Sara with Dev again, but it all worked out. Can't wait to find out what will happen next. Update soon, please!

I love where this story is going. Please update soon!!

I feel so bad for Ian here and i hate to think of what will happen when he goes to see Sara while Ian is at the dojo. I have a feeling Ian will be hurt, I hope i am wrong. update soon.

Oh, god, this is so good. I feel so bad for Ian at the mercy of Irons and Devian living with Sara. I so hope Sara is strong and does not end up giving in to Devian. I can tell Devian is falling for her. I am so glad you update so often. I am as always impatient for more. I am addicted. I also can't wait for the sequel to Breathing Space but I can wait for that so you can finish this. Keep it coming.

Thanks for your reply and the updates. Do you know that i am the same people in WB connection! I always go to this site and WB connection everyday but often just hidden...Enjoy all of the writers' hard work.

I am ablsolute enthralled. I love this and can't wait for your next installment. I am hoping Dev has a plan to completely destroy irons. I have read alot of Whitchblade fanfics and a common thread through them all is the idea that Ian's clones wake up with all of Ian's abilities. That concept always bothered me. i mean it makes no sense. How can a clone wake up like that with abilities that require knowledge, experience, and muscle tone and strength when they have been laying inert for years. I read only one that addressed the experience element. Where Ian says he could defeat the clone because he had a lifetime of experience that the clone did not, which I could buy. The the rest always still bothers me. How could they even walk, it's like coming out of a long coma. People wake up from comas with atrophe'd muscles. Oh, well, I know it is fantasy, and I can buy it all, but I guess the biologist in me is just bothered by this one aspect. Maybe you can clear this up for me. But anyway I really love the love story. But is it me or was Dev more interested in Ian sexually than Sara. Keep it coming.

Hi Tyger - thanks for reading and for your comments. Regarding the clone issue, my assumption was always that because Irons wanted the clones ready to move at a moment's command, Immo would have found some way to master the issue of their immobility in the stasis chamber; something like regular electrical shocks to their muscles to keep them fit even in their inactive state. It was not something that I dwelled on because there were other things to write about and the plot took me in a different direction.

Hi ccarol - I have actually started the first chapter of the sequel to "Breathing Space," which is called "Holding the Centre." I've been chicken about starting it because it's going to be a difficult story to write - much more challenging than "Breathing Space" was since Ian will be time-walking into the past on a quest to win a reversal of the payment Sara made at the end of "Breathing Space." I may have to wait until "Blood Seduction" is complete because I'm not sure I could write both stories simultaneously. But, I've been getting lots of nudges lately from readers so maybe I'll just take the plunge. We'll see...

I love this story and love 'Breathing Space' too. Will you have some updates for 'Breathing Space'?

Incredible, simply incredible. I am a big fan of breathing space. I stayed up all night a few months ago to read it and cried myself to sleep at the end. I am so glad you are writing another one. I love the way this one is going. I can't wait to see what you have planned for them. You are an brilliant writer.