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by Flora

person smutty
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE THE HELL R U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
U R TAKING 2 LONG 2 UPDATE & ITS DRIVING
ME INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person vbvb
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person SMUTTSRUS
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person somebody who can\'t review for your story on fanfiction.net
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU AND WHAT THE HELL IS TAKING SO LONG FOR YUO TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEED MY CLANA FIX CONSIDERING I'M NOT GONNA GET ANY FROM THE SHOW B/C OF THOSE DUMB ASS WRITERS WHO THINK THEIR ALL THAT AND A BAG OF CHIPS BUT THEY AREN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Have a splendiferous day!!! ;D
person Julie
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have to say, loving this fic. It was such a great idea to give lana powers and I'm so glad that you have lana and clark together in this story. I hate the fact that they broke up on the show. Will be looking forward to the next update.
person Sweetcherry
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The storyline was absolutely awesome from beginning to end. I couldn't believe that it started as 34 chapters, but when I started reading, I couldn't stop till I got to the last chapter, only to find out that was it!....PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN!....Great work!
person becki
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was wicked awesome. lana has some type of power huh. kewl. oh and the connection was pretty sick too. cant wait till the next update!
person smutty
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU'VE UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BUT COULD YOU PLEASE MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER LIKE YOU HAVE PREVIOUSLY?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person n
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Keep going!
person n
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Does Lana get pregnant?