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for Watching You

by dkscully

schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person sham 69
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You bloody tease! Please hurry and write more!
person Barbara
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapters. I love the emotional Grissom.
person Crystal
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn good story- I love how you led into the kissing with the sense thing. Just a small note, Sofia is spelled- well, Sofia. So minor I didn't notice it without reading it several times, and I shall give you five plus signs as soon as I return to the previous screen.
~CS~
person brainfear
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lord. Hook 'em up already! ;o)

ch4
person Barbara
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work, can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sara doesn't smoke, and you need to work on formatting properly.
person Megan
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this story is great! Please, post more chaps soon!!!!!!
person A Reader
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. You're a great writer and I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Susan
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing...I look forward to more.