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for Once Bitten...

by LadyNightshade

person Anon
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess I do hope you plan to add more! Well written, tantalizing, teasing... what will Chloe get for her birthday? Hopefully a trio of gifts, heh heh.
I must emphasize the "well written" part, after having read some good storylines poorly written, with bad spelleing ,grammar and language usage. It's always a big plus when the story has been spell-checked, proofed, and doesn't throw me off with misspelled words and poor grammar. Yaaay!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaagh! I can't believe I spelled "spelleing" wrong in my review, after making such a big deal of proper spelling! A mere typo, I assure you. Anyway, I do hope you will return to us one day, and offer my most sincere condolences on the passing of your mother. I am watching my own mother fade away this year, so I know the sadness and heartbreak you feel. The only words I can offer are that she is in a better place, where there is no pain and suffering, and though her physical body may be gone she will be with you always in spirit and in love.

:::wanders off to cry in her beer:::
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I apologize to all of you who have been trying to keep up with this story. I realize that my updating has been sporadic at best. Unfortunately, there has been a lot of things going on in my life as of late. Before it was a combination of school, computer dying, and trips abroad, but also, recently my mother passed away, and dealing with that stuff as well as everything else has caused many problems. But anyway, thank you very much for all of your faithful readerships, and hopefully soon I will have new chapters for all of you to enjoy.

-LadyNightshade-
person kaneslita
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love it! It's a little short, but I hope that means you have a lot more planned. Anyway, please keep up the great work.
person Shy Butterfly
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good please continue!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG~~ HURRY OMG.. CANT WAIT!!
person Dark Avenger
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool fic so far... I've never read any fanfiction except InuYasha before, and one Ruroni Kension fic. But this is kinda cool, all the characters of Smallville, grown up a little. Hummm, do her & Lex get it on in all thier un-attainableness? And better question, has he had any dreams lately? Let me know via e-mail when you update please.
person Faline
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!! MORE MORE MORE!! *jumps up and down* I love Chlex and this one promises to be juicy. My only beef is that you're writing Chloe as a 21 year old Sophomore. She should be either 19 or 20 depending on her birthday as a sophomore. I just had to point that out. OTHER THAN THAT, it's great. It really is. I can't wait for the next update!
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, you've certainly piqued my curiosity. Keep it comin', baby!