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for Right King of Wrong

by DonnaLynn

schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You can't just leave it this way.
Aren't they ever getting together?
how sad.
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was TOTALLY NOT a cool ending!!!!!! I was completely into the story and then POOF! No more! It would be awesome to see more of the story, and have a way better ending!! Or a better closer maybe, that was more of a cliff hanger than anything else! Mad at the ending, love you're story, would love to see more!
person jc
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please finish story it's wonderful.
person Shannon
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!! No no more please. What happens? Alec and Max have to get together
person Rachael
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Max cleared her throat nervously and Alec noticed the look of discomfort on her face. Then he remembered his state of undress and raised his eyebrows to himself. He reached out and grabbed his pants and put them on. It seemed to ease the tension in the room now that they were both covered in the most important areas.

So true. I like the way Max and Alec discuss what they just did instead of Max running out of the room like a coward.

person elle6778
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are going to continue this! I am enjoying it so far and can't wait to find out if Max and Alec do get together! It was sad that Max thought Alec just think of it as a heat incident, like it did not mean anything to him... Good job with the fic! Please, update!!
person winteryn
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing i wish it didnt stop there. You really need to write more i am hooked i want to know what else will happen. Please write more, you have a gift of writing it gets me hooked.
person MistressAlistra
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it lots! Too bad it's unfinished. But still, good fic. :)
person amniarix
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, all the right kind of bumpy, ansty, love gone wrong, I'm confused, I'm more confused, misunderstood, pheremone ridden kind of stuff we expect from Alex and Max. Vintage!