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October 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a fantastic story! truly great writing, and satisfying story!
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I loved this story! I love love LOVE the title, first of all. That's what got me. I've always imagined that John Hoynes was Jonny Quest (I don't know how, but he is!)
But onto the story, it's sweet and realistic and I love your Ellie. You have the WW-verse down really well, too. It's all very in-character. I do feel bad for Will, though. I've always liked Will. Anyway, great job!
But onto the story, it's sweet and realistic and I love your Ellie. You have the WW-verse down really well, too. It's all very in-character. I do feel bad for Will, though. I've always liked Will. Anyway, great job!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter as much as the other ones. It may not bring the story onwards, but it's fleshing out Ellie and John's feelings for each other and building a picture of how they act with each other. That, and sex is never a bad topic to write about ;)
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be any more of this? Really enjoyed it so far.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please!