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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOD I hope Carter doesn't go through with this. Please let him go back with Luka. Luka seems more secure now, and they should be together. I am a firm believer in Carter/Luka pairings. They belong together (at least in slash fics) LOL. Anyway, please let Carter and Luka be together.
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
John, you whelp! Don't you see that Luka is the one for you?!
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO. NO. NO. I hate to say this, but PLEASE do not let them get married. I hope John doesn't go through with it, and goes back to Luka. Things could get better for Luka and John. It obvious Carter is happier with Luka. Please don't let them get married.
neo
neo
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! When are you going to update? I need to find out how John reacts to Luka's statement. I have no problems following you story, so PLEASE continue and update it for those of us who have been reading and reviewing. PLEASE?!
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I cannot wait to see what John does. I hope Carter and Luka get back together because John + Luka= HOT! LOL. Anyway please update soon.
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update? I'm happy Luka finally realized his feelings for Carter. I can't wait ti find out what John will do now.
Neo
Neo
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't have trouble following your story and I hope you continue with it.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, but I got to give you some critics:
* Carter and Kovac are very uncharacteristic. I don't know if that's on purpose, but think about it.
* Check your spelling and put dots after your sentences. To read misspellings and such in a fanfic can be very annoying. You don't have many misspellings, but I know that it could be better if you read through the text once more before posting.
Otherwise, just keep going. The world is in need for some Luter-fics!
* Carter and Kovac are very uncharacteristic. I don't know if that's on purpose, but think about it.
* Check your spelling and put dots after your sentences. To read misspellings and such in a fanfic can be very annoying. You don't have many misspellings, but I know that it could be better if you read through the text once more before posting.
Otherwise, just keep going. The world is in need for some Luter-fics!
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi guys! I'm the author of this story. I'm truly sorry if I should have any misspellings and grammatical errors. =( But English isn't my native language. So it's difficult for me to translate the story. I always do read the chapters again before posting them, but sometimes I just don't know that I have misspellings. As I already said, we do not speak English over here. But if my story is too difficult to read, just let me know. Then I have to think about something else... Thanks.
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I'm glad Luka finally realized his feelings for John. Are they going to get back together? If they do will Luka be prouder or nicer to John? He better be. I feel bad for Samuel, but if John's in love with Luka and he loves him back, they should get back together. Please update soon.