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by Pat

schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually loved this. It was funny and in some ways cute. I also see you have written some Snarry. I will differently be reading those.
person Ri_love
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely conclusion. :] It was very sweet and very real at the same time. I loved how you tied all the stories together and they even make sense in the context of the show. Lord knows what I'll be thinking of the next time I watch the first season lol

Very good. Frickin' Jack! Ruins everything! lol

-Ri
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats ujst wrong...
person Akitso
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it,
at the end it sounded sweet,
can we have more please?!
please?
*Hands over cookies*
person krimson
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These were really enjoyable stories. You manages to get these characters together without breaking them out of character, which I would have thought just about impossible. But every line was so true I could hear it in the character's voice. I hope you write more on this pairing.
person Jaye
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't know if you saw my comment on an lj, so here goes:

I like this series of stories; it's interesting to see Sawyer pursuing Sayid. Plus he doesn't have as nasty an edge as he does in some stories where he is the more experienced of the pair. I hope you write more---I'd like to see if Sayid will yield completely. (And what Sawyer will do if/when he actually wins the sexy ex-soldier.) One thing, though: it's blonde for female, blond for male. (Or blond for both.) Seeing Sawyer as a "blonde" really throws me off.

Jaye