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for Abilities and Advantages

by Melrae

person macberly
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! I am so enjoying the mystery and the coming together of two of the best CSI programs! You are doing such a wonderful job of making the characters come to life and bringing them to the same area! Thank you for this much! I hope to read more soon!
person G Jane
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally another chapter! Yay! I'm loving this. Can't wait for more. Please don't take so long.
person anon
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad that you decided to continue writting this story. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I really like this story.
person G Jane
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I've read this for the fourth time, and I love it. WHEN are we going to get more? Soon, please!
person G Jane
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Always love a good Gil/Nick/Greg threesome and an NCIS crossover. Anxiously awaiting more.
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I hope you continue it. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I like the way that you have Gil Grissom as a psycic(?).
person Tracey
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great start to this story! I like crossovers so this was a must read. It'll be interesting to see how you continue. I think one of the things that sticks out as being really good about this story is your Abby, I think that giving her background into handling herself and being trained was a great touch to the story. I also really like that you are playing up Gil's abilities, I think it'll make for some interesting moments.

I hope you continue! Thanks!
person tamargrl
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot so far, so I'm mostly enjoying the story. My only problem is one of the pairings. I can suspend disbelief about Griss, Greg and even Nick, but I'm not buying Tony and Gibbs. Especially the kiss at the office. There is no way in hell that Gibbs would kiss anyone ever at work. Sorry. And I have trouble imagining them together. I could envision Gibbs and Ducky together more than Tony and Gibbs. But that's my personal opinion.
Keep working on it!
person Diayma
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far! You've got a good grasp of the characters and I love the way you've portrayed Gil. More soon please!!
person Meg
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued! Don't stop now.