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for Andromeda AU

by b5delenn

person myladymystere
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe it took me so long to read this. all i can say is i got caught up in my own writing. this story is great!! you blended your story and the episodes well and you had all their personalities right on- even how i imagine gaheris and you didn't have much to work from. loved it!!!!
person Vee
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved Gaheris's musings and then finally staying by Beka's side. I knew he'd always be there for her. They're just that kind of couple:)
Thanks for the update!
person prin69
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh tyou completely made me eyes water! such an amazing chapter, oh the emotions, and, lol, i lvoe how you stuck in the humility quote. hehe. i always loved that one. :) love the chapter.
person prin69
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome! please please please please PLEASE don't ever take this long to update again!
ooooh, i'm thinking the route to tarn vedra, as you do follow the episodes loosely.
such a sexy chapter.
person Vee017
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dances* Whooo, another pretty update! *huggles chapter*
I love this story so much, it's so great to see you continuing and with such an amazing chapter too:)
Thank you so much!
person Vee017
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to review this again!
I love it, and now that I have read through it again, I can see where he wanted to take it slow. I think a slow pace may kill Gaheris though, even if it is what he thinks he needs to do;) I loved his moment of heated rationalization that Beka was his and he needed to take her. So wonderful!
"No commitments" in what context? As in step-by-step see where it leads? If you're going to pursue a serious romantic relationship shouldn't there be some commitments? Their not sharing the other to someone else sounds like one to me;)
I love how jealous Beka got over Gaheris, they so belong together! Ican't wait to see where this heads!
I also noticed that over on Bacic Words, this was in a Beka/Gaheris/Telemachus category. There's not going to a triangle between the three of them in the future is there?
person prin69
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe. oh silly rhade, trying to calm beka down by talking of serious commitment. lol. horray for the new chapter! this is one of my favorite stories, i just cant get enough of it. *hugs* for posting! lol. i love this chapter, very steamy, and i like beka's comment to tyr about rhade being superior. heheheheh, that was great. excellent chapter!
person Vee017
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this as always. I'm here again reading it over:)
I love Beka and Gaheris's interactions with each other, especially the 'hard' time Rhade's having.
Oh and just ne little snippet caught my attention: "'What the…no, no please, by Drago bones, she is fertile now'" Loved this line, and just for clarity, Beka being fetile that means she's ovulating and it's the perfect time for her to conceive a child right?
This story is so great!
person prin69
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha,awwww. harper, always saying things when he shouldnt be. and haha, tyr, sooo in denial.awww. ya know. i always pictured rhade as a hand holder, cause in that ep. when he took her had in the hall. awesome new chapter, it made me so happy!
person Vee017
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*huggles* I love this fic! the sexual tension between them is great, I'm glad they got over their little misunderstanding. and I agree with prin69, dinner should be interesting...wonder what's on the menu? ^o^