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July 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue
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August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I finally got around to taking a peek at the next chapter, and it looks good! Your writing has become so much more polished and smooth, it's excellent!
I love that you introduced Telemachus, I always thought it would be cool if they met, and in this world they did. And Gaheris choosing Beka over Tarazed and the opportunity to have more wives is brilliant. Because he would. I truly believe he loved her more than anything in the series.
I wish you luck with this fic, and that you're able to finish it the way you want!
I finally got around to taking a peek at the next chapter, and it looks good! Your writing has become so much more polished and smooth, it's excellent!
I love that you introduced Telemachus, I always thought it would be cool if they met, and in this world they did. And Gaheris choosing Beka over Tarazed and the opportunity to have more wives is brilliant. Because he would. I truly believe he loved her more than anything in the series.
I wish you luck with this fic, and that you're able to finish it the way you want!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. Well written around and about the episodes, which is harder to pull off than alot of people think.
Your Rhade was fantastic: especially the interaction with Beka and Tyr.
Your Rhade was fantastic: especially the interaction with Beka and Tyr.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story.
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I hope you continue to update regularly.
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very hot hot chapter. And finally Rhade goes for the capture !!!! A great continuing of your story- I really enjoyed it , loved the talk with Tyr :)
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this totally made my day. i've had such a long, sad week. this made me feel better. :) you rock.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finally got around to reading this tonight. I really love it! I like that we have similar ideas on the Gaheros/Beka relationship but from different angles with the alternative realities.
The sun screen chapter was fantastic! But all of it is really good story-wise and I cant wait to see what happens with Tyr (I think you'll enjoy seeing what happens to Tyr in part 2 of mine once its up) and I really cant wait to read the next chapter!!
Look forward to you updating soon!!!!
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The sun screen chapter was fantastic! But all of it is really good story-wise and I cant wait to see what happens with Tyr (I think you'll enjoy seeing what happens to Tyr in part 2 of mine once its up) and I really cant wait to read the next chapter!!
Look forward to you updating soon!!!!
*****
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! you really mesh the series with your stories. I feel you have a really good way of writing Gaheris and I loved how he thought she was punishing him for not being worthy. the smutty scence was Great too!!!!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright, this is simply amazing. and may i say, i am in full meltdown mode and this completely made me smile. you rock.