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for The Magical Bar Trick

by Faline

person Loretta
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you want readers pair Clark and Lex, thats what readers scan the internet for.
person LV
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How cool - a shoutout para mi! lol
That chapter was toooo short - made me sad. But I'm still intrigued, as I constantly check for updates. I hope you're not having a case of writers-block - that would be unfortunate. Either way, don't rush yourself. I find that writers who rush and force the story end up loosing the quality that made it good in the first place. Soooo, take your time!
Before I forget, what's up with this girl's name???
Anyways, happy writing!
person LV
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! You DID update!!! Thank You!!!! Keep doing so because this story has me hooked!

By the way...if she hadn't given him her name...how does he know how to keep tabs on her and who to write the invitation to?

Anyways, I REALLY look forward to what's coming next! *purrs at Lex's sexiness*
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! You should continue. I really like the lex/? (my fave is Lex/Chloe) fics. Lex is just a very sexy man to me. But the writing is really good, and I really hope there will be more.
person LV
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this fic and I hope you decide to continue with it because I'd REALLY love you if you did!!!!!!!!! I'm a huge Lex Luthor fan and I honestly don't like seeing him with Clark and whoever else. An OC is perfect and I really want to see how this story may turn out. That is...if you'll keep writing!!!!!!!! Please do. :)