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for A New Beginning

by charmedfanatic

person ashlee
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was an AMAZING chapter! uh-oh, deja vu when chris was struggling under knossos.. bad omen maybe? i love how wyatt isnt evil ne more! yay! trent and chris, ALWAYS cute! hehe.. why is chris special? well, i know he's hot, but in a magical sense how is he special? why was chris crying in the shower? well, after his encounter with knossos, im sure he is upset~ who is the masked stranger who has come to comfort him?? haha, more more more please!
person Hailey
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
glad to see u got a chance to update! this was definately an anticipated chapter! chris fighting off knossos brought back flashbacks.... is knossos, TRULY vanquished?? hmm.. sources dunt die that easily, right? maybe he'll come back for chris later on? just a suggestion. the ending was so evil of u!! i wanna know who the person is!! write more soon please!
person xfaytx
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens.... haha, jsut ahd to say that! this story gets better and better and BETTER!! loved this chapter! cave scene was great~ with chris and knossos.. cant believe they actually vanquished knossos... aww poor chris, probably traumatized by wat happened earlier.. cant bring back good memories for him... who was that in the shower? update soon so i can find out!!
person Becky
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg that story was sooooooooooooooooooo great but I'm telling those cliff hangers are gonna send me off the edge, stop toturing me.:( lol But yea the sequel is really good and I feel so sorry for chris and it's about time that his bastard of a bother gfot that stick out of fuckin ass. hehehe but i love it.
person xfaytx
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhh!!! this was the most anticipated chapter!!! im just glad u FINALLy updated! this was incredible!!! loved EVERY word! oh no, chris is gone?!!! atleast wyatt isn't all crazy and evil ne more! poor trent and ryan!! wonder what scene the family is witnessing.. hmmm... be ways, more more more!! u HAVE to update soon!!!
person Kaytie
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was soooo excited when i saw that u had updated this story! for a while, i thought u had given up!!! im just soo happy that u didnt!! because im in love with this story! i could only guess wat Knossosis gonna do to chris~ wat scene is wyatt seeing at the end.. hmm.... u left us with a cliffy, so can u please not keep us waiting!! wirte more soon please!!
person ashlee
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u came back! i agree, the holidays can be a handful~ im just happy that u made such an excellent update! nice twist with wyatt turning good again! this fic just gets better and better! the end was such an evil cliffy! i hope ur not gonna keep us waiting forever because im SERIOUSLY not gonna last!!
person heath
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LIKE OH MY GOD!!! that chapter was totally freakin' great love the story 'ALOT' :) can't wait for the next chapter, this is the best story ever ever ever!!!!!!!!!!! :)
person Hailey
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!!! u finally returned after months of absence?! i think im gonna have a heart attack!!! how could u keep all of waiting like that! seriously, i ws going crazy!!! but that was the BEST comeback chapter ever!!! glad wyatt isnt evil ne more, but wheres chris?! yikes, cant wait for more!!! PLEASE update soon!
person Amby
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS! UPDATE SOON, PWEASE!!!!!!