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for A New Beginning

by charmedfanatic

person pinknstar
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. please continue soon
person winter
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please tell me your going to update this i want to find out what happens next.
person foxhana
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you updating...? i'm waiting...
person foxhana
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where's the mpreg?!?!?! WHERE's THE MPREG?!?!?!? please.... pretty please... ^^ mpreg... hope chris is the one getting pregnant, and the child better be trent's. and update soon! ^^
person jamie
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi! just wanted to say how happy i was to see that u had updated. Yes, please keep the mpreg and I'm really looking forward to more from the story :) thanks for writing this.
person Becky
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Poor chris i fell so bad for him. *huggles* for him. Great come back even though it did take like a hundred years but that ok. Keep it comin
person heath, brezo
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! love this chapter!!!!! can't wait for more and I love how you write CHRIS!!! every character is SO SO SO perfectly written and the chapters are SO interesting!!! :)
and about the mpreg, well I think it will be cool either way, but hmm... I think my votes without. Just cause I'm not sure about the whole guy pregnancy thing, but in all honesty I know I will love it BOTH ways ;D.

PS: I'm really glad I could help with the writers block, I was totally shocked when my name was in the chapter 'Arthor note' :p THANKS!! and I am SO looking forward to the next chap :D :D :D :D :D
person Tomika
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a gr8 story, and I enjoyed reading each -n- every chapters, but I was looking for the mpreg part. I know in the 1st chapter you mention something about the story including mpreg, but as I read each chapter, It wasn't mention in either chapter, I guess it might be mention in the upcoming chapters, huh? Anyways, job well done, drewfullerslove! This was indeed a very interesting story. I can't wait to write out the next chapter, this story that I'm looking forward to reading.
person heath
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could:

1. have chris get sick with a type of slow working poisen, but not tell his family because his vow to never bother them with his problems. or

2. bring the demon of fear (barbas) into the mix, since he can get in your head and make you more apt to think bad or suicidal thoughts and have him make chris get self destructive (drinking problem anyone) or something to that effect. Barbas could also play on the fact that chris thinks ryan hates him. or

3. Chris cast a spell to not be a burden to his family because of his emotional problems and ends up not having feelings anymore.

hope this helps a little bit, if I think of anything else (and you still have writers block) I'll post more :) bye

PS: I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



person xfaytx
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... poor chris!!! i understand ryan was upset, but i just feel so bad for chris!!! wats he gonna do? and trent is so sweet!! i LOVE is this fic! dcant get enough!! more please!