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for Inside Is What Counts

by GrumpyWriter

person john
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, very original. I really hope you update soon, my email is jka1@hotmail.co.uk hope you email me if you update this story, I would definitely like to read more ^-^
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update
person XXX
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please update!!!
person charlotte
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi i like this so far need more please
person Julie
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad your back. I missed your stories so much. Hope the charmed ones don't regret killing the source and allowing Wyatt to take over.
person SakariBlack
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lOVE this fic, Chris is soooo hot and the plot is so awsome! keep writing!
person alfy46
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stories so pleas keep updating
person winter
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks Wyatt's gone to far this time. Great new chapter babes, and its good to have u back.
person ennui_demorte
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter 5! So glad to see more. I love Piper's idea of working with the Charmed Ones to vanquish the current Source.

But, really, Wyatt shouldn't have done that to Chris right before the whole plan to work with the Charmed Ones or did he forget that the insurance that Piper and Wyatt don't double-cross the witches is that Chris will be with the Charmed Ones. If Wyatt really did piss off his brother this time, all Chris has to do is stay with the Charmed Ones and his father and let them protect him. Then, if Wyatt wants to take Chris by force, he'll have to go through the witches that just vanquished the Source and would probably be happy to do so again with the new Source too. Really, the only things that is stopping them from going after Wyatt right now is a spell strong enough to do the deed--remedied once the Source-vanquishing-spell is completed--along with Chris' and Leo's insistance that they don't vanquish him. If Leo really thinks that Wyatt is a threat to Chris, and he will think so at the way that Chris is scared of Wyatt from their most recent encounter, then he'll protect Chris over Wyatt. And Chris, while not wanting Wyatt to die no matter how mad he is at him, wouldn't really be in much shape or position to insist that the Charmed Ones leave his brother alone. Bad timing to go all demon-y on the little angel.

Can't wait to see more!
person charlotte
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi, i like this story so far.wyatt,chris need to stay together