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for chapter 15 Last chance

by Hazeleyed

person natalie
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuh....hunni?
u kinda need to write summore excellent chapters coz im kinda goin out of my head wiv the will-they-wont-they suspense. i wasn't built for this kinda pressure.
by the by whoever made nasty comments bout ur writin was just jealous, so there!!
person Caitlin
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent write!
Got me desperate for more, lo;.
You simply must update sometime soon! If you don't, I'll go mad. hahaha.
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and write more!
person Sara18
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly love this story and i really hope that everything works out for Sara and Gil.
person Stephanie
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what happens next! Write more soon!
person Sharon
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love, love, love this story!! You could update everyday and it wouldn't be enough for me! Can't wait to see what happens next, whether he'll remember while she's away or will fall in love with her all over again. You are a fab writer, you've got their characters down to a T, I love Grissom in denial he's so infuriatingly obliviously gorgeous! More please...VERY SOON.
person brainfear
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great addition. I'm a die hard fan here. :o) Keep on posting babe
person annika
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue and let them have a happy ending!!!

Annika
person Sara
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. its sad and happy all at the same time. i hope that gil regains his memory, but if he doesnt itll be good too.
love the story.
person Billy4Me
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, yes, another fabulous chapter. I'm not usually one for angst, but you hooked me with the romance at the beginning and now I'm in for the long haul. :-)

Needless to say, I love this story. Everyone is so in-character, and that's one of the biggest things I look for in a story. Catherine's scheming, Warrick's discretion, Sara's selflessness, and Grissom's emotional repression. I love it all! Can't wait for the next chapter!