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for All's Fair In Love And War

by inverclacky

person Cookie
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What total garbage. You could at least have attempted to hide the fact that your original character is a Mary Sue.
Seriously, she's terrible! It's kind of difficult to enjoy the story when you spend most of it wishing that the heroine would die a slow and painful death.
person Toxic
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Thats SO SWEET!! Make me feel all warm and giggly in side!
person Posongirl
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mary-sue much????