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for The Holiday Assignment

by Hazeleyed

person Azucena
schedule July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
An eerie Twilight Zone moment happened when I read the proposed name for Gris & Sara's daughter. Would you believe I wrote the baby-naming scene for my serial months ago - and guess what name Christopher picked, and why? Schpooky!

You gave your two a rocky ride in this, but what a ride it was! and then another, and another... I adored the constant fight Gris had with himself: all gruff huff "we can't, we can't" and then - god-damn! - he goes and does, in spite of himself. And the sweet way he cares for her after both traumas, not to mention the convalescence love-scene at his place. Sheer gorgeousness. Another great story - all your usual lovely spice and wit, and buildup tension, and drama. Loved it! Feel I've lived through it with them.
person Enilorac54321
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was going to go to bed at 11:30PM, and it is now 3:33AM. Once again you've woven an enthralling enchantment with your words, Master of Plot-Twists. I hope to see much more of your work soon :)
person Megha
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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BEST. STORY. EVER.

*falls over*
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have just read this and it is superb! You are a great writer. I hope you write more CSI GSR stories, I can't wait to read them!
person shadowsamurai
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I love CSI, though I haven't watched it for a while, and I always thought those two had a great chemistry. Well done! :D
person Sarah
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I found this from YTDAW, and I am SO glad I did! I've spent the past two days reading it, and I couldn't get enough. You are such a talented author.
person Wander52
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't know if I reviewed this or not....wow...one of my favorites
person Amber Britton
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing fic! Loved it! I'm so glad you continued from the first chapter!
person td
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! I couldn't stop reading. Very well written it was wonderful.
person dkscully
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is only one word for this story, Awesome. Seriously, great job with this one. I hope you write another fic soon.