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for Lizzie Learns (remake)

by LilBitch666

person anon
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are seriously screwed up, did you knwo that?
person Sam
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey write more chapters i wanna know what happens with lizzie and gabe!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked the last chapter wait to go
person Lib
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One, quotation marks are really needed, same with correct grammer...
And the last thing...yon'tn't fuck someone's clit...can can fuck their mouth, their cunt, or their ass, but not their clit...
I suggest you go to school...and learn something!
person Josie
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't even read this. Have you ever heard of quotation marks? Maybe you should read a few more fics before attempting to write again.
person Eileen
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are a moron
person Hott_stuff
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOw! This is great! I can't wait until you finish!!!
person Eileen
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is fucked up! for one thing gordo is not and never will be gay, lizzie is not a whore and neither is miranda...this whole thing would never ever happen...you can continue this crap if you want to, but I won't be reading it...that's for sure...



person deadpyro
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the story was nice and all but i thought it suxed.....sorry
person jack
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent story I love it want 2 see more